1 概要

1.1 什么是词伙

**词伙（collocations）**对于准备雅思写作的同学，是很重要的，尤其是希望获得7分的同学，因为剑桥雅思的官方标准明确说明，考生需要展示词伙的能力。
词伙有很多意思：
譬如说动词和名词的搭配，raise awareness, adopt measures, take steps, adopt approaches.
也可以是动词词组的搭配，Give a green light to, deepen one’s understanding of, pave the way for.
可以是形容词和名词的搭配，譬如说 compelling reason, ample evidence, harsh punishment.
也可以是名词词组，譬如说environmental awareness, coverage of crime, health effect
也可以是介宾短语的搭配，譬如说 in the media, on the internet, on television, in newspapers.
也可以是表示某个特定意思的习惯搭配，譬如说： lead a fulfilling life, close the rich/poor gap, discriminate between right and wrong.：have a higher chance of developing cancer, fail to achieve work-life balance 学习词伙主要的目的就是避免学生自己创造词组搭配譬如说improve the problem.（应该是solve the problem or improve the situation）。
或者是避免中式英文的直接翻译，譬如说接触暴力，很多人会写成，contact with violence，但是比较好的表达是exposure to violence；譬如说针对儿童的广告，有人喜欢写成advertisements about children，但是比较好的表达是advertisements aimed at children.
词伙学习的重要是让你的文章更加地道和漂亮。词伙的学习让学生更加注意单词在句子当中的应用，还有单词之间的联系。很多同学学习英文停留在近义词的替换上，经常忽视了词的区别。很多学生写作文喜欢用大词，基本上是同义词里拼写最难的词就写上去，窃以为考官很欣赏。考官其实注重你用词的地道性（natural），譬如说conducive 这个词经常和environment, condition, situation, atmosphere 这样的词连用，而不是beneficial的同义词。
对于雅思只是需要6分的学生来说，词伙不是特别重要，语法和句子结构更为重要。对于需要分数更高的同学，词伙决定了你们的成败，因为考官会非常看重你的词汇使用能力。一个人写作能力的功底，从词伙的使用和论述的流畅可见一二，绝对不是用几个大词就可以充门面的。
对于以后读一些对语言要求很高的科目，譬如说法律，心理学的同学，词伙的掌握也是让你们和普通中国学生区分的主要标志。可以说，很多中国学生学习是只看到单词的中文意思，而书面语比较好的学生学习非常注重单词的具体使用。这就是为什么很多同学看到高分同学和考官的范文难以理解，为什么单词看着都懂，分数还那么高？其实，差别在于就是在表达相同意思的时候，别人使用的是英文母语者熟悉的词伙和惯用表达，而很多中国学生使用的是自己的中文翻译。
如何从中文思维转换成英文习惯表达，词伙非常重要。

1.2 课程流程

1 审题，讲3个观点和解释思路
2 第一篇文章会当场讲解两段，复习精品班内容
3 其他两篇文章主要讲词伙
4 课后大家重写
5 最后提供7-7.5分范文，口语练习再练习一次

2 板书

2.1 题目1

It is the government’s responsibility to provide financial support to old people after they retire or individuals should save money for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

2.1.1 分析

两边讨论
立场为什么对的，为什么是错的立场为什么对的，为什么是错的
结构。。
第一个立场的支持观点
第二个立场的支持观点
我的观点，可以支持第一个，支持第二个
Individuals should save money for themselves. do you agree or disagree?
A 自己攒钱 B 退休后生活有钱花 C 生活质量很好
A 老年人年轻人交税 B 为国家的发展出力 C 政府应该负责
解释：投资教育，投资科研，投资基础设施，政府认可他们的贡献，鼓励人们努力工作

2.1.2 关键词

fulfil its responsibility, assume the responsibility
Pay tax, contribute to society…
Some people argue that the government should assume the responsibility in looking after the older generation because all of them pay tax and contribute to society with their wisdom and labour before they retire.
扣题：responsibility, old people, retire 连接：代词 the money of these taxpayers
保持一致
The money of these previous taxpayers has been allocated to the education system, infrastructure construction, and scientific research.
或者
The money of these previous taxpayers has been allocated to the education system, which can train well-educated, productive workers for different industries, and scientific research, which can benefit the economy with innovation.
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The government can recognise their contribution, which can encourage them to work hard.
By offering a pension and sufficient care for the elderly, the government can recognise their contribution, which can encourage them to work hard.
By offering a pension and sufficient care for the elderly, the government can recognise their contribution, and a well-developed welfare system for retirees can encourage every individual in the workforce to work hard.

2.1.3 All

Some people argue that the government should assume the responsibility in looking after the older generation because all of them pay tax and contribute to society with their wisdom and labour before they retire. The money of these previous taxpayers has been allocated to the education system, which can train well-educated, productive workers for different industries, and scientific research, which can benefit the economy with innovation. By offering a pension and sufficient care for the elderly, the government can recognise their contribution, and a well-developed welfare system for retirees can encourage every individual in the workforce to work hard. (T)

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